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Manipulated
A Naruto OC Story

Chapter 2 While wearing uniform

I felt sick to my stomach. Being pulled in by that teleportation jutsu isn't that nice, I've been traveling this way a few times before, and it always made me feel like I was going to gag. But this time the sickness seemed to hold on longer to my body. I've already been at the base for a night and I must say that the bed was, indeed, warm. But that's not the point. You see, this place showed out to be really boring. The room I was told I could stay in was depressing, a cold grey color smothered the walls and floor which, I would guess, have been blue at some point before. What I've seen so far of the base have been the same, grey, and incredibly boring. Even worse than the base Akatsuki had before.

I stretched, there had to be something I could do about this place. Being colorless isn't my thing. An idea struck my mind, everything here had been painted grey, right? So there may be a chance that there are other colors to paint with somewhere. I went up to the door leading out of the room and put my ear against it, I know it's impossible for me to notice a sneaking ninja, but why would they be sneaking here, in their own base? When I didn't hear anything I slowly opened the door and leaned my head out to see if anyone was walking down the hall. Of course no one was there and I walked out of the room and started to make my way down the hall. Everything was so quiet here, it felt like I was in a grave. The hall was considerable colder than my room, if I looked closely I could see my own breath in the few lights that was placed on the walls.

You would think that this place would have many rooms, but it didn't, some of the rooms seemed to be gigantic though. I opened every door I faced, but it didn't seem like I would find any paint. Then I finally reached the stairways, I've been told by Madara not to go further down. But there was nothing interesting upstairs, just a few rooms that would remind you of a normal home. Except that dreadful grey color that is. And if I would turn back and walk down the hall in the other direction I would only find more bedrooms. With a sigh I stepped onto the stairs, doubted myself for a short moment then walked forward, down a few of the steps.
"Madara?" I called out, "Are you down there?!"
Only met by my own echo, I continued down a few more of the steps. Then I stopped and went back up.
'I bet he'll come around.' I thought and began walking back to my room.

Back in my room I sat down on the bed, there aren't any windows here, probably because this place is underground, so I didn't even have anything to look at. A gentle knocking sound reached my ears, I raised from my seat to answer it, but it wasn't really needed.
"Hello." Without waiting for permission to enter Madara stepped into the room.
"You may come in?" I raised my eyebrows at him. Ignoring my protest of him just walking in, he grabbed something from under his coat.
"I got something for you."
Confused I watched him pull out a bundle of black fabric and hand it to me.
"Here you go."
I grabbed the fabric and folded it out. It was clothes, similar to what Madara himself currently was wearing.
Hanging the robe like clothing over my arm I asked,
"Why are you giving me this?"
"Oh, I know how much you wanted the Akatsuki uniform before, but you never got one. So I just thought you might appreciate getting a uniform this time around."
I stared at him with open mouth and quickly glanced down on my colorful attire. If I wore this uniform instead, maybe I wouldn't feel so out of place here.
"Wow, thank you."
"My pleasure. Go on, try it. It would be a shame if it didn't fit."
With a big smile on my lips I turned to the bed again and lay out the parts of my new uniform on it, trying to figure out in which order I was supposed to put it on. A cough caught my attention and I span around.
"You're still here?"
He pulled his head back.
"Of course, how else would I see if it fit you?"
"I'm not going to change if you are going to stand there!"
He scoffed.
"Why are you making this into such a big deal? It's not like I haven't seen you naked before."
I felt my face heat up and turn into an intense red color.
"GET OUT!" I screamed, my voice getting into high pitch on the end. Laughing he walked out of the room.
"Come out when you're done."

The robe fit me rather good, the belt was a little bit too small for my hips though, so I pushed it up to my waist instead. Going through the uniform one last time before going out, I noticed something hard in one of the secret pockets. When I pulled it out I saw that it was a big hairpin, not thinking much about it I unbraided my hair and used the hairpin to put up my hair into something that resembled a ponytail.

When I stepped out from the room I found Madara leaning against the hall wall, upon seeing me he stood up and came towards me.
"Spin around." he ordered and I did what he said. While I spun around he pulled and pressed gently in the fabric. It tickled and I held back a few giggles.
"Hmm, it seems like it fits. Looks good as well." he grabbed my shoulders and I could feel a slight smile lurking beneath his mask. "Come, there's something I'd like to show you."
We walked side by side down the hall, not saying a word to the other. I couldn't care less that he started to lead me down the stairs and not up, my mind had already traveled someplace else. I felt a twinge in my stomach.
'How in the world does he know my size?'
And here it is, Chapter 2.
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New chapters will from now on come every monday. But I'm
open for suggestions and if the Naruto manga will let me, I might start writing 2 chapters every week. It really depends on the manga.
Please leave a comment about your thoughts :D

Have you ever done something on one computer but finished it on another ? I just did. The picture is made on my home computer and I wrote on my school computer, it's really painful, but worth it.

This chapter wasn't supposed to be this long, I just couldn't stop writing that beginning :iconwthplz:

Big thanks to :iconxalalax: for drawing out a scene from this chapter [link]


I'm not a native english speaker, so if you see any grammar/spelling misstakes, please inform me what's wrong and how it should be.

If you feel like my character is messing with the story line or is in other ways disturb you, please tell me why you are feeling this way, and I'll see what I can do.

See my OC here [link]

Edit 17 0f January 2012:
Her name was changed to Atsuko.

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Tobi (c) Masashi Kishimoto
Atsuko (c) Seriiko
© 2011 - 2024 Seriiko
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HolyTengu's avatar
*0* I love how Atsuko-san looks~
I want Tobi's clothes too!
I laughed with the last paragraph xD. I'm starting to like TobiAtsu a lot! ^^ That's a problem because I have an OC too xD. Just kidding, I love seeing OCs with my favourite character.